Z Day

by RyanJK12

Tags: Serious, War

Description

This game should be taken seriously, this is my first game please make sure to tell me any faults

Stats

(on a scale of 1 to 8)

Maturity Level: 5 - aren't you a little to old to be trick or treating
Story Difficulty: 6 - wandering through the desert
Play Length: 4 - A well spent lunch break
Player Rating: 4 - slightly more fun than homework (based on 6 ratings)
My Rating: you have not yet rated this game
Played 74 times and finished 7 times since 6/10/2010

Comments

I'm going with 3J. You need to proofread and spice up your story a little bit. Have a background story, maybe some briefing for the main character, and don't be so vague about everything. Detail will make all the difference here. 3/8, but I'd be happy to change it later. :)

-- deadly_sinner66
6/16/2010 1:29:15 PM:

Still rather incoherent. I have no idea who I am, or how I ended up in wherever the hell that compound was or why there's zombies or anything, really. It is much improved, but it needs some work. Your spelling and grammar isn't terrible but it's obvious that as you get excited, it slips a bit. Proofreading each page is what I'd advocate as a solution. Spend more time on Character Development because it was sorely lacking. I really didn't like the one page where it was either fake a heart attack or die. Terrible choice set there. Overall though, much better than before. Still wouldn't be half-decent if it wasn't your first game but pretty decent for a first attempt.

-- JJJ-thebanisher
6/12/2010 1:52:57 PM:

It�s kinda short but fun, I like your writing style and the fact that you have many different paths to follow, waiting for part 2 :)

-- TheLoneWanderer
6/10/2010 10:16:25 PM: