White Light

by BeardedHoplite

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Description

You are Charles Wilmington, improvished and blackmailed scientist. You must now go to Siberia and witness the horror of horrors...

Transformed from a short story I wrote.

Stats

(on a scale of 1 to 8)

Maturity Level: 3 - must be at least this tall to play
Story Difficulty: 2 - walk in the park
Play Length: 3 - A nice jog down the driveway
Player Rating: 4 - slightly more fun than homework (based on 9 ratings)
My Rating: you have not yet rated this game
Played 62 times and finished 10 times since 1/19/2009

Comments

Great story, but if you want to make a storygame out of it, you would need several stories that link.

-- Vitamins_n_Stds
1/20/2009 9:49:48 PM:

It's an excellent story, but it should remain a short story. I suppose this is how you share a short story with a CYOA site, but there's a reason we're a CYOA site.

-- Anubis
1/19/2009 10:06:28 PM:

Alright, watch the spelling and grammar. This was poor for a CYOA, you can actually see where you copy and pasted the story and just added on death endings and stubs at intervals. Really lazy. You should have written something new instead of simply copy and pasted and mutilated a short story. Still the writing was ok.

-- JJJ-thebanisher
1/19/2009 9:49:56 PM:

You should have left this as a short story. The writing was good, but you didn't have enough to draw the reader into a CYOA.

I'd just post the original on the forums, or increase the length and have another character abducted or something.

-- Rommel
1/19/2009 9:31:31 PM: