Twilight of Apocalypse: Pt 1

by EvAngel

Tags: RPG, Serious

Description

Lauren Mathers, a young college student on break decides to go on vacation to the beach where events take a turn for the worst and leave her fighting for her life. Now her and her friends must find a way to survive in this post-apocalyptic world.

*Based on student film under construction*

Note: This is my first game here, so please be gentle :) Part 2 is coming soon

Stats

(on a scale of 1 to 8)

Maturity Level: 6 - i'll need to see some identification
Story Difficulty: 5 - run through the jungle
Play Length: 4 - A well spent lunch break
Player Rating: 4 - slightly more fun than homework (based on 12 ratings)
My Rating: you have not yet rated this game
Played 96 times and finished 17 times since 1/18/2009

Comments

For a linear story to work, it needs to be well-written. This story doesn't work.
Don't put items in if the player doesn't need them/never gets the chance to use them.
Every death links insults the player for choosing it. How am I supposed to know that I'm an idiot for not praying over the corpses in the car?
It's an all right idea, but the execution needs work.

-- Sethaniel (Score of 0)
4/9/2010 5:22:16 PM:

Very Important Tip 5: "When you write, DO NOT give your player an option, if when they choose that option, you call them stupid for doing it. Remember, it's never the players fault for choosing it, it's your fault for giving them the option."
Still, you did put forth some effort. Oh, also-
Gimme an L! Gimme an I! Gimme an N! Gimme oh, you know where this is going.

-- Melike (Score of 0)
3/29/2009 6:45:52 PM:

linear

-- Expander (Score of 0)
3/29/2009 11:54:43 AM:

nice game please make part 2 long one please

-- louiseleon (Score of 0)
3/28/2009 12:07:59 AM:

Okay seriously some parts sounded interesting but they just weren't really detailed and the choices that weren't the 'right' ones were all bullshit.

And the items, not needed, if you don't pick up the gun, or the shovel, you can still continue the 'story' without consequence.

Still, first game's allowed to be bad I guess, hope your next one is better.

-- Miccy2000 (Score of 0)
2/17/2009 4:39:30 AM:

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