The Fire

by melissa543001

Tags: Life

Description

In this game you will have to use you brain to get out, any wrong turn and you and your friends will die. Be the hero, or, just be a kid caught in the fire.

Stats

(on a scale of 1 to 8)

Maturity Level: 1 - appropriate for all ages
Story Difficulty: 4 - march in the swamp
Play Length: 4 - A well spent lunch break
Player Rating: 4 - slightly more fun than homework (based on 12 ratings)
My Rating: you have not yet rated this game
Played 56 times and finished 14 times since 12/29/2008

Comments

Good. Imaginative.

-- NealShustermanFan
7/16/2009 5:18:08 PM:

I have to say, this story goes beyond linear. This story is linear in a whole new, twisted way. Never before have I seen such hideously dull choices, and outcomes sometimes completely removed from them.

The story also seemed to force the reader through one path through many choices leading back to the same thing. It would have been better to just eliminate those choices than provide the illusion.

Finally, although you tried to make some kind of connection between the characters, with development amounting to: "you like her", I just thought: I don't give a shit, ESPECIALLY since your character has no choice but to be romantically inclined, yet you provide the illusion of that choice.

Finally, not saving some emotionless romantic figure does not condemn one to a life of loneliness. I'm sorry, that's just flawed logic there.

-- Rommel
1/2/2009 9:09:58 PM:

Wow. I really liked it! And I got out in the end without dying! YAYYYYYY!

-- goosebumpsreader
1/2/2009 3:58:37 PM:

So in the end, everyone in class was crushed and burned to death but at least our two protagonists can go out on a date. Good first story, I don't have anything to say that hasn't been said before.

-- Melike
1/2/2009 4:56:08 AM:

That was an interesting story, that got right down to the point, nothing wrong with that. However, there is something wrong with your choices. It's never a good thing when someone is reading a story on here, and one of the choices is: "Stay here and die" I mean, obviously no one is going to choose that one. Other than strange pointless choices, I liked it well enough to give it a four.

-- Leon101
12/31/2008 5:17:39 PM:

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