The Devil's Fire

by Ashen_Snake

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Description

EDITS: Dead End fixed? Past Tense turned into present. Note: Kay', I fixed what I could see... but that's all I'll fix now (Unless you point out where another problem is). I can't get into correcting every little grammar error, nor can I fix the Julian/Bana thing. Why? Well, because I'm soooo busy making this into an actual novel. Maybe you'll want to buy it? Wait--damn it, you already know the whole thing! Crap. Anyway, I hope you enjoy it, if you haven't played it yet.

The Devil's Act - an event in history carried out by one man that obliterated three entire states. Bana-Jxo has been leading a rather undercover life after what he'd done, but when the government starts sending out his own kind to kill him, he gets into a crux that uncovers just when all went wrong. Now, Bana must figure out the secrets of the Zempaph people, and protect newly found comrades in the process...

"The first rule to remember, Julian, is that pain is a gift to lead to a better tommorrow... A bittersweet gift, but still a gift."

Stats

(on a scale of 1 to 8)

Maturity Level: 5 - aren't you a little to old to be trick or treating
Story Difficulty: 4 - march in the swamp
Play Length: 7 - It keeps going and going
Player Rating: 7 - even better than Reeses' Cups® (based on 23 ratings)
My Rating: you have not yet rated this game
Played 231 times and finished 16 times since 8/19/2007

Comments

Wow, Completely Awesome. Bravo.

-- slong667 (Score of 0)
7/23/2010 12:44:08 AM:

Excellent.
As with Rozeline, the pictures of the book did not work for me--but nevertheless, I can say this was an excellent story. Fascinating character, though the names were honestly too exotic for my taste--but that's really just a matter of taste, and nothing against your story. Great work!

-- Trzcina (Score of 0)
1/5/2010 10:46:23 PM:

Loved it. Absolutely loved it. The pictures of the book didn't work for me, so I kinda missed a chunk of story. :(

Anyway, really good work. I hope I can write something as good one of these days (since I joined two nights ago).

-- Rozeline (Score of 0)
12/11/2009 5:19:47 PM:

Well Done.

-- koolgai (Score of 0)
11/8/2009 3:28:59 PM:

For some reason I gave this an Eight rather than a 7. There are a few slight flaws, but the brilliance and beauty of it all was too good to be a 7. Your writing is very emotionally mature for a 14 year old. Surprisingly so. Great use of items and colored fonts, pictures, poetry, although I still have no idea what that Rammstein song said.

I enjoyed this game enough that I went back and got all 5 five endings after beating the game.

Just one question: what can I do with the screwdriver and pearl necklace?

-- urnam0 (Score of 0)
2/23/2009 4:18:40 AM:

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