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by Rommel
Tags: War

Description

Terra Proxima, an Epic Choose Your Own Adventure Serial by Rommel

Episode I: First Strike

You are training as an elite soldier at the military academy Tel-Takir. You go by the callsign Sentinel. Soldiers are no longer so much cannon fodder, they are lethal weapons, especially these ones, part of the global peacekeeping force: The United Guns. You have almost graduated from the academy, and are looking forward to tomorrow, when you will be assigned a posting. You have a bad feeling about graduation night though, and you have been trained to trust your instincts. Something is up...

 This is the second version of First Strike.

Stats

 (on a scale of 1 to 8)

Maturity Level: 5 - aren't you a little to old to be trick or treating
Story Difficulty: 5 - run through the jungle
Play Length: 6 - It'll be a while, better grab a Snickers®
Player Rating: 7 - even better than Reeses' Cups® (based on 27 ratings)
My Rating: you have not yet rated this game
Played 151 times and finished 12 times since 12/18/2008

Comments

5 stars
-- Sanchez13 (Score of 0)
11/28/2009 9:47:08 PM:
too short T_T
-- crition (Score of 0)
9/22/2009 6:28:36 PM:
Pros:
Writing
military scenarios
details
game mechanics- this is truly a game

Cons:
couldn't you have scripted or itemized the story at least somewhat so I wouldn't have to keep track of every little variable myself?
combat maps are confusing
not long/epic enough
-- urnam0 (Score of 0)
7/26/2009 11:35:52 PM:
D; 4-1 ? I could take em. IT CALLED SPRAY AND PRAY!
*sighs*

You need a sniper in there, and some nades for the cluster of elites lol. Here are my final stats:
Item 1:Plasma pistol

Item 2:52 credz

Item 3:Plasma infantry rifle

Item 4:17 plasma riflecartarges (one shot)

Item 5:Plasma carbine

Item 6:

Item 7:

Item 8:

Dogtags:
Squad Ldr. "Nightstalker"

Health: 5/17

Marksmanship:9 + 2 (11)

Sharpshooter

-- ben (Score of 0)
4/3/2009 7:33:37 AM:
...Apparently I hadn't left a review before...
Well, it's a good excuse to replay this gem! The combat is really superb, and makes the combat more than just "Do this or die." A cool conflict, although there isn't a whole lot of backstory which would have been nice, and some great combat and writing. Excellent game, Rommy!
-- Anubis (Score of 0)
1/22/2009 8:34:10 PM:

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