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DescriptionThe kingdoms Malish and Groga are caught in a horrible war. Ten Malishian warriors have been captured, imprisoned, and tortured by a horde of Grogaians. You, also a Malishian warroir, has come to their rescue. There are two main endings and, hopefully, I'll prepare a sequel for both. Now, go into the caverns and free your fellow Malishians.
Stats(on a scale of 1 to 8)
Maturity Level: 3 - must be at least this tall to play |
Comments
i agree what JJJ said
-- Dazohan11
9/2/2009 6:48:58 AM:
Compared to other releases this is just absolutely incredible. On an actual scale, it's about a 3. You had an under-developed backstory which is better than none at all and you managed to have a somewhat decent structure to your pages, as well as actually using description. So it wasn't terrible, but it just wasn't good either. I never "got into it", but you do show potential. Also, this isn't long enough to be cut off. You're planning a sequel but it should have just been a continuation of this storygame. Sequels should really only attach themselves to a 7 length storygame or a REALLY good 6 length storygame. That's in the vicinity of two hundred good pages. This wasn't that.
-- JJJ-thebanisher
8/4/2009 4:00:55 PM:
much too short to give an experience
-- Rommel
7/14/2009 2:15:40 AM:
Pros:
Gives reader the feeling of actually being in caverns Enjoyable plot reminiscent of classic CYOA books Semi-polished backstory and action scenes Cons: Grammar and syntax lacking polish Some random endings with no indications from the previous page Not fleshed out enough, could have used a few more drafts Too short, could have combined sequels and this into one game
-- urnam0
7/13/2009 6:55:48 PM: |