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Stories > Fantasy Adventure > Forgotten, then lost

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Description

You are a super hero who's been sent on a mission to search a cave for something that shouldn't be there for a local researcher. When you get there you find yourself surrounded by evil wizards and warlocks. These power hungry fends must be after whatever is is this cave as well. You'll have to either fight your way though them, or out smart them, and get that special thing, whatever it is. Before these creeps do.

Stats

 (on a scale of 1 to 8)

Maturity Level: 2 - choking hazard for children under 4
Story Difficulty: 3 - trek through the forest
Play Length: 3 - A nice jog down the driveway
Player Rating: 4 - slightly more fun than homework (based on 7 ratings)
My Rating: you have not yet rated this game
Played 49 times and finished 9 times since 8/21/2009

Comments

Eh, I have seen worse... much worse. On the other hand, I have also seen much better. There was very little explanation to the story. You described that we were going to a cave to do something, and then the game involved passing several choice trials. Choose the wrong choice and die sort of thing, no multi-paths. Then all of sudden the entire story is explained at the end. Not much thought, huh.

Rating= *** out of ********.
-- Leon101
10/19/2009 3:25:49 AM:
what i said before
-- Dazohan11
9/2/2009 6:38:52 AM:
I agree with JJJ. Your plot seems pretty generic and the story is too short. I recommend putting more effort into a detailed story and a longer game.

You have potential.
-- Rommel
8/29/2009 1:18:47 AM:
Hate it when there's no backstory. Your writing is alright, nothing spectacular but no weakness either. Your imagination is somewhat average here, it takes real imagination to plan a story with an interesting backstory and multiple paths. Not terrible, but too short and too average.
-- JJJ-thebanisher
8/22/2009 10:37:46 PM:
make the story longer and more creative with the choices
-- dazohan11
8/22/2009 6:38:43 AM:
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